Immigrate to Australia!!


Last term we were learning about what makes us Australian. We explored how Australia has become such a multicultural place. We learnt that the biggest contributing factor of Australia’s multiculturalism is immigration. After learning about all of the different reasons why people immigrate, our whole class decided that Australia is the BEST COUNTRY in the world.

Since our class had also been learning about persuasive writing we decided to use what we had learnt about immigration and write. Our author’s purpose was to persuade people to immigrate to Australia. In our writing we demonstrated at least three different reasons why people would want to immigrate to Australia. We also viewed many new and old advertisements that persuaded people to come to Australia. Next, we illustrated our own little advert picture to be combined with our written work and to help persuade our readers. We voted on the best work in the class to display on our blog and below are the finalists!! Please have a read of our persuasive pieces! 🙂

What did you think about our persuasive pieces…..Did we persuade you?

6 Comments to

“Immigrate to Australia!!”

  1. April 30th, 2014 at 9:07 am      Reply soapie soaps Says:

    Dear 3/4M,
    It really persuade me
    It didn’t really surprised me
    like I mean
    they would have got chosen
    there work was fabulous
    they looked so good
    just look at them
    they look so professional
    by the way where are the
    suitcases and the family culture sheets
    Soapie soph

  2. April 30th, 2014 at 11:13 am      Reply Tina do Says:

    Dear 3/4M,
    OMG it is so cool!
    One question,where are the suit cases and family culture sheets?
    I feel so sad for the people who didn’t get chosen 🙁
    Tdog 🙂

  3. May 1st, 2014 at 12:53 am      Reply Aimes and Tracey Says:

    Dear 3/4M,

    The persausive writng and pictures look AMAZING.

    Aimes and Tracey

  4. May 1st, 2014 at 7:50 am      Reply Datty The Dat Says:

    Dear 3/4M,

    I was REALLY happy when i made on the winners! 😀
    I think that I was really lucky or something. 😛
    Those that didn’t make also made good ones! Maybe everybody made a good one! The class had good luck in them!

    Datty Dat!

  5. May 25th, 2014 at 11:36 pm      Reply kiara Says:

    Dear 3/4 M,

    The advert pictures look amazing and the persausive texts are awsome.


  6. May 27th, 2014 at 11:41 pm      Reply Fragrance Says:

    reat job all of the people work it was amzingWORK
    Datty dat
    Danny Ho Ho
    Hannah Banana
    Chloe Boey
    Teena Leena

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