Immigrate to Australia!!
April30
Last term we were learning about what makes us Australian. We explored how Australia has become such a multicultural place. We learnt that the biggest contributing factor of Australia’s multiculturalism is immigration. After learning about all of the different reasons why people immigrate, our whole class decided that Australia is the BEST COUNTRY in the world.
Since our class had also been learning about persuasive writing we decided to use what we had learnt about immigration and write. Our author’s purpose was to persuade people to immigrate to Australia. In our writing we demonstrated at least three different reasons why people would want to immigrate to Australia. We also viewed many new and old advertisements that persuaded people to come to Australia. Next, we illustrated our own little advert picture to be combined with our written work and to help persuade our readers. We voted on the best work in the class to display on our blog and below are the finalists!! Please have a read of our persuasive pieces! 🙂
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Advert Illustrator- Chloe Boey
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Author- Chloe Boey
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Advert Illustrator- Aimes
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Author- Aimes
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Advert Illustrator Teena Leena
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Author- Teena Leena
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Advert Illustrator- Hannah Banana
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Author- Hannah Banana
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Advert Illustrator- Danny HO HO
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Author- Danny HO HO
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Advert Illustrator- Missy
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Author- Missy
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Advert Illustrator- Datty Dat
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Author- Datty Dat
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Advert Illustrator- Jenny
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Author- Jenny
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- Advert Illustrator- Chloe Boey
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- Author- Chloe Boey
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- Advert Illustrator- Aimes
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- Author- Aimes
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- Advert Illustrator Teena Leena
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- Author- Teena Leena
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- Advert Illustrator- Hannah Banana
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- Author- Hannah Banana
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- Advert Illustrator- Danny HO HO
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- Author- Danny HO HO
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- Advert Illustrator- Missy
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- Author- Missy
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- Advert Illustrator- Datty Dat
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- Author- Datty Dat
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- Advert Illustrator- Jenny
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- Author- Jenny
Dear 3/4M,
It really persuade me
It didn’t really surprised me
like I mean
they would have got chosen
there work was fabulous
they looked so good
just look at them
they look so professional
by the way where are the
suitcases and the family culture sheets
From,
Soapie soph
Dear 3/4M,
OMG it is so cool!
One question,where are the suit cases and family culture sheets?
I feel so sad for the people who didn’t get chosen 🙁
From,
Tdog 🙂
Dear 3/4M,
The persausive writng and pictures look AMAZING.
From,
Aimes and Tracey
Dear 3/4M,
I was REALLY happy when i made on the winners! 😀
I think that I was really lucky or something. 😛
Those that didn’t make also made good ones! Maybe everybody made a good one! The class had good luck in them!
From,
Datty Dat!
Dear 3/4 M,
The advert pictures look amazing and the persausive texts are awsome.
From,
Kiara
reat job all of the people work it was amzingWORK
Jenny
Datty dat
Missy
Danny Ho Ho
Hannah Banana
Aimes
Chloe Boey
Teena Leena